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February 6th, 2008 by strathcononprimary

I hope you like my limerick

There once was a boy called Hamish

Who bought himself a big Danish

But when he got home

He fell in some foam

And now they call him Shamus

by Rory

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# 1 strathcononprimary Says:
February 6th, 2008 at 3:50 am
i like you limerick
you should write lots more
what inspired you?
Abbygail
# 2 Ms M Says:
February 11th, 2008 at 1:14 pm
It’s a great limerick Rory – you got the rhythm just right!
Ms M
# 3 Nanma and Papa Scobie Says:
April 28th, 2008 at 10:37 am
ROTFL – hehehehe
# 4 Morna & Marcus Says:
April 28th, 2008 at 11:08 am
Dear Rory – loved your limerick – fantastic that you managed to rhyme Hamish, Danish and Shamus – a superb bit of assonance! Hope to hear you reciting it yourself soon on a microphone. And we love danish pastries too!
All the best from Marcus and Morna here in Harrogate – Keep up the beautiful writing.
# 5 Auntie Says:
May 23rd, 2008 at 8:01 pm
Very funny Rory and so true too.
# 6 Bec W Says:
June 30th, 2008 at 6:46 am
Rory, it’s great the way you finally found something to rhyme with Hamish, I think you have a great future as a poet – from your greatest fan – Mum