Strathconon Primary Blog

Snow Poem

February 6th, 2008 by strathcononprimary

I wrote a poem about snow in the style of Robert Burns

Snow

Thee falls in flaky bits

And float like paper in thy air

Until the gritter turns thee brown

People ae think ye’re fun

When ye shine clear under the sun

by Hamish

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# 1 Ms M Says:
February 11th, 2008 at 1:04 pm
Good poem Hamish. I’m sure Robbie B would have enjoyed it too.
Ms M
# 2 Iain M Says:
March 13th, 2008 at 1:10 am
hey hamish

thats a good poem

i liked how it was in the style of robert burns

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# 3 strathcononprimary Says:
March 18th, 2008 at 7:48 am
Good poem Hamish I really liked it
ABBYGAIL
# 4 Morna & Marcus Says:
April 28th, 2008 at 11:01 am
Dear Hamish - how fantastic that we can hear you reciting this wonderful poem - from the internet - all the way here in Harrogate - great to hear your voice reading the poem out so clearly and well - the words themselves are just fab - great work wee man!